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Over my head.
You dumped
Me hard.

It was impersonal;
didn’t wait to see
[Me] hit.

I was ragged,
Mean. And
Felt poor,
Shaved, blue,
Sharp.

[I] need sleep.

Speak to me!

I notice my mind
Sneeze,
[Go] cold.

Shoved under.

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He Shall Rule

On the northern
Prairies.
With thousand[s] [of]
Other victims

We slept and
Ate outdoors,
The Pole five
Miles north.

Before daybreak
A blaring out
To wake the dead.
Charging down,

Marauding.

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Startling to
[Be] shipping out
Early.

Packing,
Take along
Photographs.

I was
Confounded
[But], I could
Cut it
I suspect.

I’ll find out.

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I came out
Subdued,
Unhappy.

I was a soldier
[But]
I had to prove it.

I ran.

I couldn’t [escape]
This horror show.
I got orders.

Make a man of you
Or kill you
Trying.

A good choice?
A good choice.

Others are button
Pushers.

We do the work

Good luck!

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